Dear Chiarani
Thank you for your Wikigender contribution. Your article on Queen Sirkit is informative and interesting BUT does not provide enough objective or factual information.
We have a few editing suggestions for your article to make it more informative and this will help when you are writing future Wikigender articles.
You mention that the Queen is highly popular with foreigners and her own people yet your references only come from the Queen’s own website. We try to keep our articles as objective as possible so it would be good if you could find some other perspectives to make your biography more balanced. If you wish the article to provide a generally positive view of the Queen then you will need to provide more supporting evidence (preferably from a foreign perspective i.e newspapers, online magazines etc).
One suggestion for referencing sources would be to link your article to other pages in Wikigender that are related.
If you could make these amendments to your article I think it will improve your work as the course continues.
Thanks again for your contribution.
Salema
